Callum, your magazine drafts is one of my favorite, it really works with your genre of music and you have a very good idea of where you are wanting to take your ideas and how you would like your finished product to look. The model on your front cover looks really good, she fits the magazine genre perfectly with a serious rock look about her. The image also has no shadow at all which really highlights some good photography and directing skills you have and it really stands pout on your page. I only have one negative and that the front cover bottom burgundy box with text inside, I think you could do with making the text bigger, or making the box smaller, but i feel you need to get remove the space which is above and below the text inside it. I hope i haven't been to picky with that but i am really looking forward to seeing your final product! Keep up with her good work!
Callum, your magazine drafts is one of my favorite, it really works with your genre of music and you have a very good idea of where you are wanting to take your ideas and how you would like your finished product to look. The model on your front cover looks really good, she fits the magazine genre perfectly with a serious rock look about her. The image also has no shadow at all which really highlights some good photography and directing skills you have and it really stands pout on your page. I only have one negative and that the front cover bottom burgundy box with text inside, I think you could do with making the text bigger, or making the box smaller, but i feel you need to get remove the space which is above and below the text inside it. I hope i haven't been to picky with that but i am really looking forward to seeing your final product! Keep up with her good work!
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