When receiving feedback off my fellow classmates jack left a comment on my blog allowing me to know what I need to change in my magazine to make sure I get the most marks available. Jacks comment said:
"Callum, your magazine drafts is one of my favorite, it really works with your genre of music and you have a very good idea of where you are wanting to take your ideas and how you would like your finished product to look. The model on your front cover looks really good, she fits the magazine genre perfectly with a serious rock look about her. The image also has no shadow at all which really highlights some good photography and directing skills you have and it really stands pout on your page. I only have one negative and that the front cover bottom burgundy box with text inside, I think you could do with making the text bigger, or making the box smaller, but i feel you need to get remove the space which is above and below the text inside it. I hope i haven't been to picky with that but i am really looking forward to seeing your final product! Keep up with her good work!"
This comment allowed me to know that there were some good aspects on my produced pages and that also there was things that I needed to change to make sure I got the most marks possible. Jacks feedback allowed me to realise that the box on the front cover which I had designed was too big and that I needed to change the size of the box and I have done so and my front cover is now looking better.
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